Hello guys.
How's going.
Welcome to my backpacker Information round.
My name is Jami Swan, am 19 years old and since 4 months as a backpacker in Australia traveling.
How did this happen?
I wanted to experience something I'll remember later, and so I got the idea as a backpacker exploring Australia after my graduation.
Six months traveling, six months working.
I applied for my visa for a year abroad in Australia, which currently costs € 290, which one is entitled to travel and work, finished off an international health insurance for 30 € per month and booked my flight for the 1 October 2015th
Finally it was time my flight was launched in Frankfurt, made a stop in Shanghai and then flew across the ocean to Australia.
After 33 hours I arrived in Sydney at 6.33 o´clock.
After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, I began my first day with a coffee.
The world's best coffee you get in Australia by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art.
There I also met already the first backpackers, they suggested me to visit the Sydney Sea Live where you can get to know most of the animals that live in Australia.
I must confess, the only thing I had planned was the hostel for four days.
Otherwise, I wanted to let myself drift along the east coast.
Hier mal ein paar Anregungen ...
Grundsätzlicher Tipp: nicht so lange Sätze!!
How's going. > How's going?
am 19 years old > I am 19 years old
> since 4 months traveling as a backpacker
> I got the idea to explore Australia as a backpacker
for my visa for a year abroad in Australia > for my visa to stay for a year in Australia.
It currently costs € 290 and entitles to travel and work. I also took out an international ...
Frankfurt, made a stop > Frankfort. The aeroplane made a stop ...
After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, > After I had checked in at the hotel (which I had booked from Germany before) , I began ....
by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art. > brewed by a barista, who is ...
There I also met already the first backpackers, they ... > There I met already the first backpackers.
They suggested to visit ...
where I had arranged with my coffee backpackers. > arranged a meeting (?) with ...
Hello guys. How's going. Welcome to my backpacker Information round. My name is Jami Swan, am 19 years old and since 4 months as a backpacker in Australia traveling.
How did this happen?
I wanted to experience something I'll remember later, and so I got the idea as a backpacker exploring Australia after my graduation. Six months traveling, six months working.
I applied for my visa for a year abroad in Australia, which currently costs € 290, which one is entitled to travel and work, finished off an international health insurance for 30 € per month and booked my flight for the 1 October 2015th
Finally it was time my flight was launched in Frankfurt, made a stop in Shanghai and then flew across the ocean to Australia. After 33 hours I arrived in Sydney at 6.33 o´clock. After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, I began my first day with a coffee. The world's best coffee you get in Australia by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art. There I also met already the first backpackers, they suggested me to visit the Sydney Sea Live where you can get to know most of the animals that live in Australia. I must confess, the only thing I had planned was the hostel for four days. Otherwise, I wanted to let myself drift along the east coast.
After Sea Life I went to Good Food Month, Australia's Largest Food Festival, where I had arranged with my coffee backpackers.
The next three days I spent exploring the city and a variety of attractions such as the Harbour Bridge and Opera House. After these days I drive with my coffee backpackers, to Broken Bay.
At Broken Bay, I had wonderful 14 days. I took a diving and surf course and got my International diver's license. What a fantastic feeling to ride the waves and explore the underworld.
Do you know? At first I was worried that I find no connection in Australia. I never thought that all these people are so nice, helpful and courteous.
One evening on a Barbie, which named a barbecue party where everyone brings something eat and drink with itself, I met three backpackers who wanted to go to Barrington Tops National Park in the next few days. They asked me if I want to join them. So it happened, I drove at the 14 weekday from Broken Bay in an old caravan departed to Barrington Tops National Park.
We bathed in lakes, wandered through the wilderness and camped at a campsite with many others.
Luckily I bought in Sydney at a garage-sail, it is called the day where the residents in their garages selling prices items they no longer need for a small price, a tent which was very useful in these days.
On the 5th day I decided to travel further. But the question was how should I came out of here, cause the other wanted to stay there longer. Fortunately for me, a family with two children just grabbed and agreed to take me with them to Taree.
Now, the question remains, what should I do in Taree, there is nothing and backpackers only make shopping stop there. The father of the family told me. "Hey Jass, take the train, Six-Country Link trains arrive daily, three drive to Sydney and three drive in the north."
In Australia, you have the habit to shorten or extend names. For example, Rodney changes to Rod and John to Johnno. That’s strange, but typical for the Aussies.
I stayed one night in Taree in a hostel with 8 beds rooms. Luckily I was not invaded by debug as my bed neighbor.
But so we got to talking and decided together to take the train direction to Brisbane. In the train we decided to make for some days a stop in Coffs Harbour.
At Coffs, we visited the South Solitary Lighthouse, what a wonderful view of the coast, The Big Banana that´s the symbol of Coffs, many national parks and went every Sunday to the weekly market where you could buy everything cheaper. We lived by an elderly lady as Host. Host refers to people who allow backpackers to sleep at them for a small price or household help.
When we had both seen much, we decided to move on to Brisbane after 15 days.
There, our Host-Family laid us near, to take a view from the tower of City Hall or to take a ride in the Wheel of Brisbane. Most of our time we spent in South Bank Parklands because there is offers everything and you meet many other backpackers.
As my companion decided to stay in Brisbane even longer, I moved on alone. The fact that the bus was too expensive and too slow, I decided to come to Surfers Paradise as a Hitch-hiker.
At Surfers arrived, I was really hit from the city, now I can understand that it´s also often is called “the South Miami”. I surfed at the best beaches and visited the Sea World and Movie World. Surfers Paradise is breathtaking, it gives life.
After 18 days full of life and fun I continued to drive by bus to Byron Bay. In the morning I surf or dive with many others and the afternoon I visited a lot in nature, for example the secret waterfalls.
My Christmas I celebrated under a Palm tree in the shining sun by a Barbie and on December 28, I flew back down to Sydney for watching the New Year Eve with my bedbugs friend. When one should have made in the life, then to have witnessed the New Year Eve fire in the Royal Botanic Garden in Sydney.
After New Year Eve I came across an ad for working in Stanthorpe as a farm assistant. In the next 3 months I will be working for supplement my travel budget. My thereafter remaining 2 months, I will re-discover travel to know even more of Australia.
My tip now for you
In Australia, the food is extremely expensive. Buy your thinks at the weekly market or in cheap shops like Woolworth or Aldi. Moreover, you can save a lot, if you purchases in the shops after 23 o´clock.
You can sign up “airbnb”, there you see all Host´s where you can make Couchsurfing, it´s almost free housing and look around for camp sites, there are often mobile homes where you can stay for little money, like me in Stanthorpe.
In addition, I would recommend to open an account in Australia and to request a tax identification number. You going to need it for working, firstly, and secondly, you somehow have to withdraw money, cause from Germans account costs a lot of fees.
Now my last tip, read travel guides and experiences of other backpackers before you departure. It has really helped me for my trip as not to leave entirely stand without a clue in Australia.
I hope you were able to get a glimpse of my life as a backpacker here in Down Under
Hooroo ma Mates (The Australian Goodbye)
Hallo Hut!
Witzigerweise habe ich gerade heute an dich gedacht, wieso es von dir keine Aktivitätszeichen mehr gibt (Schade für das Italienisch-Forum, wenn es dabei bliebe!!)
Hier mal ein paar Anregungen (aber ehrlich gesagt, ist der Text verdammt lang...)
Grundsätzlicher Tipp: nicht so lange Sätze!!
How's going. > How's going?
am 19 years old > I am 19 years old
> since 4 months traveling as a backpacker
> I got the idea to explore Australia as a backpacker
for my visa for a year abroad in Australia > for my visa to stay for a year in Australia. It currently costs € 290 and entitles to travel and work. I also took out an international ...
Frankfurt, made a stop > Frankfort. The aeroplane made a stop ...
After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, > After I had checked in at the hotel (which I had booked from Germany before) , I began ....
by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art. > brewed by a barista, who is ...
There I also met already the first backpackers, they ... > There I met already the first backpackers. They suggested to visit ...
I must confess, the only thing I had planned was the hostel for four days.
Otherwise, I wanted to let myself drift along the east coast.
where I had arranged with my coffee backpackers. > arranged a meeting (?) with ...
> I got the idea to explore Australia as a backpacker
for my visa for a year abroad in Australia > for my visa to stay for a year in Australia.
It currently costs € 290 and entitles to travel and work.
I also took out an international ...
Frankfurt, made a stop > Frankfort. The aeroplane made a stop ...
After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, > After I had checked in at the hotel (which I had booked from Germany before) , I began ....
by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art. > brewed by a barista, who is ...
There I also met already the first backpackers, they ... > There I met already the first backpackers.
They suggested to visit ...
where I had arranged with my coffee backpackers. > arranged a meeting (?) with ...
"Danke für die Kontaktaufnahme mit dem Team von unserer Fan-Unterstützung.
Wir können keine Benutzerkonten feststellen, die mit der email-Adresse (...) verknüpft sind.
Mfg, ... "
Ciao, Tamy.
P.S.: Ich nehme auch gerne mal ein "Danke" entgegen für meine Übersetzungen... (:-))
"Danke für Ihre Kontaktaufnahme mit dem Team unserer "Fan-Unterstützung".
Bei diesem Benutzerkonto liegen keine Order vor, die rückgängig zu machen wären.
Sie sind von uns nicht belastet worden, und werden es auch nicht, solange Sie keinen vollständigen Auftrag geben.
Wir haben Ihr Benutzerkonto deaktiviert aufgrund Ihrer Veranlassung.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen,
Wonderful Union"
Gibt es da einen echten Unterschied? Hat jemand eine Idee dazu?
Ohne -al soll häufiger (aber nicht immer) in den USA verwendet werden. Aber das ist mir kein guter Grund.
Vielen Dank schon mal!!!
Für geographic vs. geographical hab ich auch was gefunden:
https://geobuzz.wordpress.com/2010/01/21/geographic-vs-geographical/
Ich suche irgendwie nach handfesten Gründen.
Aber vielleicht gibt es wirklich für jedes Wortepaar unterschiedliche Begründungen.
Für "classical mechanics" würde ich gefühlsmäßig nie "classic mechanics" sagen; aber warum?
Hallo und guten Morgen,
kann vielleicht jemand mal diesen Text Korrektur lesen, vor allem wegen der Tenses? Das wäre toll - vielen lieben Dank!
On Wednesday, we went to a pension near Green Park. After we had taken our bags in our room in the pension, we made a boattrip on River Thames. On the boat, you had a really good view to Westminster which is the working place of the government.
On Thursday, it rained in the morning but we had a really yummy English breakfast with sausages and tomatoes. Then, we went to a natural history museaum and it wasn't boring at all. In the afternoon we went to Covent Garden. There were so beautiful music and good artists. When we got hungry we went to a foodstand and ate very good food..
Today I'll see you.
On Friday evening, we are going to drive by train to Wales. There, we are going to see aunt Irma's relatives. Then, we are going to visit a coal mine that had beene closed in 1976, so many people were jobless. I am happy to see the walish, interesting things!
Ein anderer Test:
... That was so stupid of me. It had happened in the computer store in London where I say a DVD (Sherlock Holmes) and I knew that Angela loves Sherlock Holmes so I wanted to buy it for her but it was too expensive. In that moment I only wanted to have the DVD because I love Angela and so I put it under my jacket. This wasn' t a good idea becasue the store detectives saw me when I was about to steal the DVD and then we had to come with them but they were unable to find anything so we were allowed to leave the shop, I know that I'll never in my life repeat this.
Der Text macht mir einen ganz guten Eindruck... (:-)
Dennoch ein paar Anmerkungen:
(1) ich würde sagen: Westminster which is the seat of government
(2) history museaum > history museum
(3) There were so beautiful music and good artists. > Vorschlag: There were good artists and so beautyful music to hear.
(4) foodstand > food stand - oder: food stall
(5) that had beene (!!) closed in 1976, so many people were jobless. > that had been closed in 1976. Many people lost their jobs at that time.
(6) walish ?? - Google hat bei diesem Wort auf Suaheli getippt (:-))
Meinst du 'walisisch' = Welsh ? -
I am happy to see the walish, interesting things! > klingt für mich etwas eigenartig. Wie lautet der Gedanke auf Deutsch?
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(7) That was so stupid of me. > Vorschlag: It was so stupid of me to do that.
(8) where I say a DVD > where I saw a DVD
(9) and I knew that > Vorschlag, hier einen neuen Satz zu beginnen: I knew that ...
(10) loves Sherlock Holmes so I > loves Sherlock Holmes, so I (ein Komma zum Luftholen)
(11) In that moment I only wanted to have > Vorschlag: In that moment, all I wanted was to have ...
(12) becasue (the store detectives) > because ...
(13) to come with them but they ... > ich empfehle kürzere Sätze. ... to come with them. But they ...
(14) But they were unable to find anything > But they could not find the DVD (/ a stolen object). So we were allowed to leave the shop. (PUNKT)!
(15) I know that I'll never in my life repeat this. > I know that I will never do this again in my whole life.
Hallo und guten Abend Tamy,
ganz vielen lieben Dank an Dich - welche Sprachen kannst Du eigentlich nicht? ;-)
Liebe Grüße und noch einen schönen Abend,
pantasilea