Vielleicht etwas spät, aber ich habe auch nochmal drüber geguckt:
After we had taken our bags > to < our room……………….
......we made (we went on) a boat trip on > the < River Thames.
There were so beautiful music and good artists. >>>>>> There was such beautiful music and good artists.
On Friday evening, we are going to drive by train to Wales >>>>>> On Friday evening we are going to go to Wales by train
we are going to visit a coal mine that had beene closed > statt ‘had been’ würde ich schreiben > was < (sagt mein Gefühl!)
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In that moment I only wanted …. > At this moment I only wanted…… (oder auch wie Tamy es korrigiert hat)
Lg Edel
