Hallo!
Hier mal ein paar Anregungen ...
Grundsätzlicher Tipp: nicht so lange Sätze!!
How's going. > How's going?
am 19 years old > I am 19 years old
> since 4 months traveling as a backpacker
> I got the idea to explore Australia as a backpacker
for my visa for a year abroad in Australia > for my visa to stay for a year in Australia.
It currently costs € 290 and entitles to travel and work. I also took out an international ...
Frankfurt, made a stop > Frankfort. The aeroplane made a stop ...
After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, > After I had checked in at the hotel (which I had booked from Germany before) , I began ....
by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art. > brewed by a barista, who is ...
There I also met already the first backpackers, they ... > There I met already the first backpackers.
They suggested to visit ...
where I had arranged with my coffee backpackers. > arranged a meeting (?) with ...
Ciao, Tamy.
