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Hello guys.
How's going.
Welcome to my backpacker Information round.
My name is Jami Swan, am 19 years old and since 4 months as a backpacker in Australia traveling.

How did this happen?

I wanted to experience something I'll remember later, and so I got the idea as a backpacker exploring Australia after my graduation.
Six months traveling, six months working.

I applied for my visa for a year abroad in Australia, which currently costs € 290, which one is entitled to travel and work, finished off an international health insurance for 30 € per month and booked my flight for the 1 October 2015th

Finally it was time my flight was launched in Frankfurt, made a stop in Shanghai and then flew across the ocean to Australia.
After 33 hours I arrived in Sydney at 6.33 o´clock.
After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, I began my first day with a coffee.
The world's best coffee you get in Australia by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art.
There I also met already the first backpackers, they suggested me to visit the Sydney Sea Live where you can get to know most of the animals that live in Australia.
I must confess, the only thing I had planned was the hostel for four days.
Otherwise, I wanted to let myself drift along the east coast.

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Re: TEIL 1 -
Hallo!

Hier mal ein paar Anregungen ...
Grundsätzlicher Tipp: nicht so lange Sätze!!


How's going. > How's going?
am 19 years old > I am 19 years old
> since 4 months traveling as a backpacker
> I got the idea to explore Australia as a backpacker
for my visa for a year abroad in Australia > for my visa to stay for a year in Australia.
It currently costs € 290 and entitles to travel and work. I also took out an international ...
Frankfurt, made a stop > Frankfort. The aeroplane made a stop ...

After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, > After I had checked in at the hotel (which I had booked from Germany before) , I began ....
by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art. > brewed by a barista, who is ...
There I also met already the first backpackers, they ... > There I met already the first backpackers.
They suggested to visit ...
where I had arranged with my coffee backpackers. > arranged a meeting (?) with ...

Ciao, Tamy.

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