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Hallo!
Hier mal ein paar Anregungen ...

Grundsätzlicher Tipp: nicht so lange Sätze!!

How's going.
> How's going?

am 19 years old > I am 19 years old

> since 4 months traveling as a backpacker

> I got the idea to explore Australia as a backpacker

for my visa for a year abroad in Australia > for my visa to stay for a year in Australia.
It currently costs € 290 and entitles to travel and work.
I also took out an international ...

Frankfurt, made a stop > Frankfort. The aeroplane made a stop ...

After I had my things in my, from Germany booked, hostel, > After I had checked in at the hotel (which I had booked from Germany before) , I began ....

by a barista brewed, the master of Espresso Art. > brewed by a barista, who is ...

There I also met already the first backpackers, they ... > There I met already the first backpackers.
They suggested to visit ...

where I had arranged with my coffee backpackers. > arranged a meeting (?) with ...

Ciao, Tamy.

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VIELEN VIELEN DANK, ich habe weitergeleiet.
Hut

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