Hi, kann mir mal jmd drüberschauen ob hier irgendwo Fehler sind? Ich musste meinen Text in Passivform schreiben:
The diagram illustrates the process of producing orange juice. There are 12 steps in total. The process commences with fresh oranges being delivered and unloaded a factory where the raw product is graded and washed. Graders remove bad fruit as it passes over the rollers. Then the oranges go through a sizer and into a juice extractor. At this step the oranges are compressed and the juice went into an evaporator. The waste can be used as an animal food. Within the evaporator the juice is briefly heated to a high temperature. At the end of this process you get concentrate juice. This concentrate juice is being refrigerated and filled with a canning machine into tins. Now the product is going to be shipped to Dubai. In Dubai water will be added the concentrate. After this step you have orange juice and this can be filled into a bottle and can be sold.
