kann bitte jemand über meinen Satz schauen und sagen, ob er richtig ist. Danke!
She ran down the stairs and almost knocked a very tall man over, who was dressed well as always; a jacket over a white shirt, black trousers and shining shoes.
Ich würde auf jeden Fall zwei Sätze aus diesem Bandwurm machen und das 'over' vorziehen.
Also:
She ran down the stairs and almost knocked over a very tall man. He was dressed well as USUAL; WITH a jacket over a white shirt, black trousers and shining shoes.
She was running down the stairs and almost knocked over a very tall man. As always, he was well dressed in a jacket over a white shirt and black trousers completed by shining shoes.
