den nomizw na uparxei to ftou sou sta ellhnika....para mono ironikes le3hs h prwtaseis: bravo, toll gemacht....kannst echt stolz auf dich sein=solltest dich schaemen....hhhhhh isws kai, bist echt nur meine spucke wert....;-) ti les?? xaxa!
E3hghse ths to kapws etsi....giati germanikh metafrash gia to: ftou sou den uparxei!
re valia, na sou pw, eisai kalh sta agglika?? an nai, 8a mporouses na me boh8eiseis se mia agglikh ergasia?? exw grayei hdh ena beitrag sto uebersetzungforum twn agglikwn, alla den nomizw na mou apanthsei kaneis....:-(
eeeeeeeeeeecht??? wow! eisai trela....Also...wir sollen in englisch eine gedichtsinterpretation machen....wir haben 3 gedichte zur wahl bekommen ich entschied mich fuer die hier:
There Is Only One Story
There is only one story:
he loved her,
then stopped loving her,
while she did not
stop loving him.
There is only one story:
she loved him,
then stopped loving him,
while he did not
stop loving her.
The truth is simple:
you do not die
from love.
You only wish
you did.
Erica Mann Jong
oder dies: One Parting
Why did he write to her
'I can't live with you'?
And why did she write to him
'I can't live without you'?
For he went to west, she went east,
And the both lived.
Carl Sandburg
Leider ist mein englsh so schlecht,dass ich kaum einen richtigen satz bilden kann....deshalb bitte ich euch, ob mir jemand helfen kann.Ich muss nur zu einem von den beiden gedichten eine gedichtsinterpretation machen....ganz einfach everyday english,und wenn einapaar fehler dabei sind, also ein paar klitzikleine fehlerchen auftauchen, macht es nichts....
Bitte bitte! Ich brauch dringend eure hilfe!! Danke im voraus....
gia thn periptwsh pou den 3ereis ti shmainei gedichtsinterpretation:
das ist eine gedichtsanalyse....also, the poem "bla bla (titel des gedichtes)" by (Name des Autors) shows/deals with....
ich muss den inhalt des textes wiederhergeben. so wie bei einer zusammenfassung eines textes: in dem text geht es um....bla bla bla!
nachdem, muss ich die form beschreieben, also zb das gedicht hat eine 6versige strophe, (waere der fall beim zweiten gedicht, welches ich geschreiben hab, das kuerzere) und dann muss ich gucken ob zb ob alliterationen dabei sind oder enjambement, rythmus, reim und alles halt was zur form gehoert... dann muss ich den inhalt der strohe(n) und vielleicht auch den stil des gedichtes (muss aber nicht unbedingt sein), wenn zb das gedicht einen ironischen stil hat oder wenn es sehr leicht zu lesen ist, weil everyday english benutzt geworden ist usw...,erklaeren.
das wars...nicht mehr....da das zweite gedicht kuerzer ist muss man zwar nicht viel zur form schreiben, aber daher mehr zum inhalt, weil durch die kuerze des gedichtes der inhalt , mehr analysiert werden muss um das gedicht verstaendlich zu machen....also man muesste sicht sicher mehr gedanken machen, was der auter damit meinen koennte....im gegensatz zum laengeren gedicht, muss man zwar mehr ueber die form schreiben, aber ich glaub es waere leichter das gedicht zu verstehen.
Bitte hilf mir.....der lehrer schnautzt mich so was von an, wenn ich schon wieder eine hausaufgabe mit 2t klaesser sprachniveau hab
mporeis na mou metafraseis sta ellinika ti thelei apo esas na peite?
diavasa sta germanika ti egrapses alla den xsero gia seires kai tetoia opote tha sou kano ena sxoliasmo kai oti allo mporo
gelasa me to hey wie geths dir wichser pou egrapses kalo kalo
e, ma etsi einai h ka8e deuterh le3h einai malakas....:-D
tespa....loipon, auto pou perpei na kanw einai ne analhsw ena apo ta duo poihmata....prepei na grayw gia to periexomeno tou poihmatos,gia thn forma kai thn glwssa (px. aplh:everyday english)
To keimeno prepei na arxizei me: the poem "bla bla (o titlos tou poihmatos) by (to onoma tou poihth) shows/deals with....
Ystera apo auto prepei na perigrayw thn forma, dld, sto prwto
There is only one story:
she loved him,
then stopped loving him,
while he did not
stop loving her.
The truth is simple:
you do not die
from love.
You only wish
you did.
Erica Mann Jong
prepei na pw pws to poihma apoteleitai apo 3 Stanzas,opou to ka8ena exei 5 verse....kai meta prepei na brw an o poihths xrhseimopoihse metaphors, alliterations, symbols kai alles tetoies blakeies....px sto prwto kai sto 6o verse: there is only one story exei ena alliteration only one (kai h duo le3ehs arxhzoun me to idio gramma).to rhyme se auto to poihma einai abbcb....
kai meta apo auto prepei na pw peri tinos proketai sto poihma....px, einai duo atoma, ta opoia den 3eroun ti 8eloun kai paizoun thn koloku8ia....katalabes ti prepei na kanw?
katalava re glikia mou alla den xsero an mporo na sou apantiso oles tis erotiseis tha prospathiso monaxa kapoies tha xsekiniso me to deftero pou einai mikro
the poem is about love.
it makes us think about two people who loved each other very much; so much indeed that they thought they cant live without one another.
Though, they splitt up, they decide not to be together, they keep on with their lives. They didnt die, and they wont die from beeing apart they may even met other people, they may even be in love again. So why did they say such worts? why did they thought they cant live without beeing together? It's because if you love someone you think that you have found the meaning of life, because love is the only reason to live about, because love makes your existence worthwhile, because love makes you feeling alive!
den xsero kan poso prepei na grapso giafto an theleis kane tin analisi esi sta ellinika kai go sti metafrazo
kala eisai foberh....se xilioeuxaristw....hdh ekanes polla.....to form mporw na to grayw kai kapws monh mou,mhn se kourazw kai allo.... pantws se euxaristw para polu....me boh8hses polu glukia mou.....
erwthsh: o enas leei: I can't live with you....dld den mporw na zhsw mazi sou? me liga logia, den se antexw?
kai o allos leei den mporw na zhsw xwris esena?i can't live without you...
an nai, tote to sunais8hma den einai amibaio....h katalaba egw kati la8os??
opote shmainei to i can't live WITH you se authn thn periptwsh, den mporw na zhsw xwris esena??sou 3anastelnw to poihma gia thn periptwsh pou kati diabases la8os....
Why did he write ti her
'I can't live with you'?
And why did she write to him
'I can't live without you'?
For he went west, she went east,
And they both lived.
GRAPSE LATHOS KATSE NA SKEFTO
THA SOU KANO ANALISI TO PROTO POIHMA TO DEFTERO EINAI KOMPLIZIERT
The title of the poem is "there is only one story", in my opinion the title could also be "Bad timing"
He loves her and she loves him back, then he stop loving her but she cant stop loving him, so she suffers but he doesnt care since he doenst love her anymore, and this is they way it is or it maybe the other way around.
she loved him, then, for one reason or another, she doenst love him anymore, so, too dad he is still in love with her. Too bad since she wont come back.
he suffers but the truth seems to be simple, noone has ever die from love even if death would had been better than life itself when you suffer from love.
sou egrapsa o titlos tou poihmatos einai bla bla bla, tha mporouse omos kalista na einai bad timing kakos xronismos
thn agapaei kai ton agapei kai afti, meta aftos paei na tin agapaei omos afti sinexizei kai etsi ipoferei omos aftos den noiazetai afou den tin agapaei pia kai etsi exoun ta pragmata i isos kai allios
ton agapise alla gia ton ena i ton allo logo den ton agapaei pia, krima loipon pou aftos tin agapaei akoma. krima giati afti den tha xsanagirisei.
ipoferei alla i alitheia fainetai na einai apla, pote kaneis den pethane apo tin agapi akoma kai an o thanatos moiazei kaliteros apo zoi otan ipofereis apo erota
sry pou den apanthsa allo x8es, alla hmoun hdh polu wra sto internet kai o logariasmos....juhuuu!katalabes...:-P
Mou eipes pws mporeis na mou metafraseis apo ellhnika/germanika sta agglika....??:-s mporeis??Giati egraya ena keimeno, to opoio sumperilambanei kai thn forma kai alla sxetika me thn forma ktl.an bariesai den uparxei problhma, to katalabainw apolhtos meta apo to pri3imo me auta to poihmata....xixi!;-)
Pantws eisai foberh, se euxaristw ateleiwta polu....opote xreiasteis kati, mhn dista3eis na mou steileis....:-)
